Thursday, November 17, 2011

Written in Water

There he lay
His name written in water
And the waves made from the name ebbed away,
Touching the lass sitting little away on the bank,
Writing her own name in water
And then watch her name ebb away too.

She sat there too
Her hand still in water
Now just moving
And making random waves in it.
The blowing wind catches her attention
For it reminds her of a familiar scent,
Making her wish she could smell it again.
A smile escapes her lips,
Stars light up in here eyes,
And an odd form of beating begins in her breast.

There she lay, her hand in water
Writing a name not her own.
She continues to stare in her own reflection
Even after the name ebbs away
The one closer to her than her own.
She takes a deep breath
So full of passion; so full of hope
Giving her the strength
To sit there and gaze at the water
And find a face in it not her own.

A rustle in the leaves and the sound of some steps
And she turns around all euphoric
For her wait is now over
She puts her arms around him
And they share each other’s essence.

There he lay
His name written in water
And the waves made from the name ebbed away.
He wondered who theses waves
Would touch this time

5 comments:

  1. I am not sure I understood this very well, but I just let myself flow down with the words..and may be it is meant to be like that.

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  2. @sonal: The idea is that the guy is looking for some one to love, when he finds some one whom he believes he can open up and ask out, it turns out that she is already taken

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  3. For me it read rather poignant... the finding and the losing in the same moment. But then I wonder again... is it a commentary on the present day written on water relationships...
    Or a sweet tale of yearning?

    There are so many multiple levels to this one!
    Lovely verse!

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  4. @Usha: It turned out to be a prediction for the future

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