“When does your train leave?”
“It leaves at ten, so we have about an hour’s worth of
time left.”
“Ohhh let me stop at a chemist first. The shops will
close by the time I return.”
“You’re not well?”
“No, I am fine. I just need to pick up sanitaries.”
“Why do you need to pick up sanitaries?”
He realized it was a stupid question to ask of her.
She gave him a glance as she pulled over close the chemist shop. She silently
turned the ignition off and got down to purchase the sanitary pads. He turned
on a game on his cell phone to pass time till she would come back. She returned
in a few minutes and started the engine. A few quiet minutes passed before he
started staring at her.
“What?”
“I have an awkward question.”
“Your questions are always awkward.”
“It is possibly stupid too”
“They happen to be that as well. But I am used to them
now, ask.”
“If diapers and
sanitary pads work on the same principle, why doesn’t a company make them both?
I mean wouldn’t it make sense to use the same technology on two different products.”
“Companies already do that.”
“Companies already do that.”
“Oh, they do? It makes sense to do so.”
“Remind me again, why I am still a friend with you?”
“Remind me again, why I am still a friend with you?”
“Because of my intelligence and charm!” he said as he
made a rolling motion with his hand and grinned wide.
“And yet you ask questions like this.”
She continued to smile at him.
“So why are you leaving by the train, when you can take the early morning flight?”
She continued to smile at him.
“So why are you leaving by the train, when you can take the early morning flight?”
“Arrey, I
will have to wake up early for the early flight. Sleep will get screwed.”
“Yeah, I know how much you need your beauty sleep.”
“Haaww... I
need to be my best for the presentation tomorrow. I thought I can catch up on
my sleep in the train. Both will reach at the same time anyway.”
“No baba,
beauty sleep.”
“Yeah, yeah, Beauty sleep. What do we know; some hot girl
might end up hitting on me in the train.”
“Oh please do check if the girl is short sighted
before you get such an impression from her.”
Both of them ended up guffawing. They had reached the
railway station, and she parked the car. He took his bag out and walked towards
the stairs while she went towards the ticket counter to purchase an entry
ticket. She came back with one soon as there was no queue, and they both
started climbing the stairs together. Since he was carrying his bag, she got
ahead by a few steps. He noticed the way in which she climbed the stairs. How
she took long strides that would make her take two steps instead of one. How
her pants would pull against her and accentuate her rear, and how while
climbing down there would be a little jiggle in them if she skipped a step.
She started looking at the overhead sign boards which
would inform them where which compartment would be once the train would stop.
Since they were still early by almost twenty minutes they were not showing any
information. He set his bag down on one of the many seats on the platform while
she asked a vendor where the AC coaches would stop. He saw that he had
forgotten to bring water with him for the journey and signalled her to get a
bottle for him from the same vendor.
“Your coach will be just a little ahead, so we can sit
here till the train comes.”
“Oh good, I don’t have to lug this bag around then.”
“What are you carrying in it?”
“My laptop, a pair of clothes for tomorrow and a tee
and capris for the return trip tomorrow.”
“You know if this presentation doesn’t work out, you
can always try to find work as a coolie.
You have good experience.”
“It’s not that heavy. Besides I can’t sleep in pants
on the way back. So I packed a set of capris as well. I will come back to the
company guest house and change before returning.”
“And why are you not taking a flight back?”
“Umm. I thought I could shop around a little and take
the late night train back. Catch up on my beauty sleep.”
“You and your sleep.”
There was a pregnant pause. He didn’t know what she
was thinking. He wanted to talk to her about it, but was unsure how to bring it
about. He stared at her feet for a while which she was tapping away. She was
wearing brown colored chappasl which
had a pattern of red curves drawn into them. They were quiet for a while before
they heard the announcement of his train. Soon enough they could make out the
beam of the headlight of the train, followed by the blaring horn seconds later.
Once the train came to stop, she stood by the waiting chairs while he went and
kept his bag on his berth. He came out to say a bye.
“Reshma.” He called her name in a slow prolonged
voice.
“Yes Sri?”
“Do you want me to get you anything from there?”
“I thought you’d never ask. I hear you can get good
street-wear there. Get me some bracelets or beads.” She replied with a grin.
“Sure”
The train gave another blaring horn which meant that
it would now leave. He turned and climbed on to it. She waived a bye.
“Message me one you reach home.”
This is how both of them parted. He got back to his
berth, and lay down thinking about the night. Of all the things he had told,
the ones he wanted to tell, and more importantly the ones he didn’t. He was
lost in his thoughts of her, wondering when and how should he tell her about
it. Few minutes passed before he received her message that she had reached
home. Seconds later he received another wishing him a good night’s sleep. His
beauty sleep was far from his mind as he lay awake on the berth now, lost in
his thoughts.
oh oh! You left it in the middke!! :|
ReplyDeleteDoes he tell her?! what does he want to tell her??
Beautifully written :)
err.. it should be middle! :D
DeleteIf anticipation is what you leave a reader with, that makes for a good story, you write darned good ones. And yes, I love that anticipating part... the what could happen next ... kind of writes that leave everything so openended, and invite the reader in :)
ReplyDeleteNice one again!
She's want to hear, for sure :)
She'd* typo. :D
ReplyDeleteTypo: chappals
ReplyDeleteNicely written. Im not a regular at reading but this looks more like an opening scene for a movie perhaps. And then they go in flashback and dance in the rain :D